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Day 3 of #NaPoWriMo #GloPoWriMo
The three words that chanced upon me were - sail, serendipity and storm. I have never done this before and I don't have a Personal Universal Deck. I didn't have the time for making one today (it's a project in itself, I guess and I will be making one hopefully sometime in the near future) so I meditated on the words and these words were the first to spring up. So, here it is:
the surface of the sea looked calm
what about the underbelly?
the perfect sail, the perfect skies
what with the undercurrents?
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looking at the map before me
--like a curious child playing within the labyrinth--
i criss-crossed through the lanes
tempted to try one after the
other
life being bound by time people
around, push—
i squeezed my eyes, snapped my
fingers
put my fears to rest and jumped (they pushed)
oblong
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I love experimenting with my lines, pauses and enjambment as you may have noticed. Do let me know your views, particularly my A to Z take of fluid images and alliterations. You can click on the AtoZChallenge/ Napowrimo tags to look at my earlier posts.
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PS : This post is posted as part of BlogchatterA2Z 2021 challenge.
Poem posted as part of the 30 day poetry challenge for the month of April NaPoWriMo2021
4 comments:
I really like the idea of the sea having an underbelly!π
I liked your different style of having pauses.
Yes, home is a state of mind! Be comfortable exploring!
Let's feel at home wherever we are!
I am in awe Deepa... Creating alliterations and two such beautiful poems... Kudos to you and more power Yo your talent. Home is but only a state of the mind...that stuck with me. Yet my mind sometimes yearns for that concrete brick that was.... That's another game of the mind I guess π.
Beautiful Deepaπ
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