Monday, April 28, 2025

Day Twenty Eight-NaPoWriMo – Let it Roll On – A Poem Inspired by Chenda Melam

NaPoWriMo: today’s prompt (optional, as always). Music features heavily in human rituals and celebrations. We play music at parties; we play it in parades, and at weddings. In her poem, OBIT [Music], Victoria Chang describes the role that music played in her mother’s funeral. Today, we challenge you to write a poem that involves music at a ceremony or event of some kind.

Today’s poem is an experiment in rhythm, repetition, and musical energy. I drew inspiration from chenda melam, the vibrant percussion ensemble tradition of Kerala, where sound, tempo, and movement build in waves. This is my first time trying something like this, and I found the process both exciting and meditative. Here's the poem:

Artist-Devassia-Devagiri-ChendaMelam
Artist-Devassia-Devagiri





Day Twenty Eight-NaPoWriMo – Let it Roll On
A Poem Inspired by Chenda Melam



Let it let it let it roll on
let it let it let it roll on
let it let it let it roll on
let it let it let it roll on

drums and sticks and drums and sticks on
drums and sticks and drums and sticks on

let it let it let it roll on
let it let it let it roll on

look here, look here, look here, swing on
look here, look there, look on swing on
let it roll on, let it slow down
let it trumpet, let it go on

swing here, swing there, let it move on
swing here, swing there, let it move on

let it let it let it roll on
let it let it let it roll on

bells and cymbals, cymbals play on
bells and cymbals, cymbals play on
sway here, sway there, let it cling on
sway here, sway there, let it cling on

let it roll on, let it speed up
let it roll on, let it speed up

letitletitletit rollon
letitletitletit rollon
letitletitletit rollon
letitletitletit rollon





Note on Chenda Melam:
Chenda Melam is a traditional percussion ensemble performed during temple festivals in Kerala, India. The central instrument, the chenda, is a cylindrical drum played with sticks, known for its deep, resonant sound. A full melam can involve dozens—or even hundreds—of performers, creating intricate rhythmic layers that build slowly in speed and intensity. The result is a powerful, immersive musical experience that resonates not just in the ears but throughout the body. This poem attempts to capture a fragment of that energy in words.




Let me know what you think—or if you’ve ever tried writing with rhythm as your guide. This year's NaPoWriMo is concluding in three days! 

Thanks for reading!


Sunday, April 27, 2025

Day Twenty Seven-NaPoWriMo-Inheritance

NaPoWriMo: today’s optional prompt. W.H. Auden’s “Musée des Beaux Arts” takes its inspiration from a very particular painting: Breughel’s “Landscape with the Fall of Icarus.” Today we’d like to challenge you to write your own poem that describes a detail in a  painting, and that begins, like Auden’s poem, with a grand, declarative statement.

Artemisia Gentileschi-Judith Beheading Holofernes
image: Smarthistory.org
Artemisia Gentileschi, Judith Beheading Holofernes, 1611–12-- 1620–21


Day Twenty Seven-NaPoWriMo-Inheritance
After Artemisia


They knew how to bleed without dying
Hold it! Let me behead Holofernes
Judith sliced through his bones and mass
Poised and gracious
She held him by the hair,
as one holds memory—tight, bitter, unrelenting

The blade didn’t slip; it knew the course
as if rehearsed on sleepless nights,
each sinew parting like fabric,
each drop a psalm spoken backward.

Judith’s white sleeves, soaked in history—
the kind they won’t write down.
Look! The maid does not flinch,
holds the bowl like scripture.
Not vengeance—no. A translation—
of silence into scream, of memory into blade,

passed down through locked jaws
and fists clenched beneath silks.
This is not a myth but a survival.
It is not enough to remember.

You must retell it—with muscle, with color,
with the sharp edge of inheritance.


Day Twenty Six-NaPoWriMo: here’s your prompt! Try your hand at a sonnet – or at least something “sonnet-shaped.” Think about the concept of the sonnet as a song, and let the format of a song inform your attempt. Be as strict or not strict as you want.


Day Twenty Six-NaPoWriMo-Sonnet in the Language of Wounds

I traced your pulse through silence, vein by vein,

Where starlight sank in skin like whispered thread.
You wore your sorrow soft, like summer rain—
A body blooming poems where it bled.

Your blood coagulates beautifully,
Each cut a constellation sealed in red,
As if your ache obeyed some symphony
That only broken angels ever read.

You taught me love is not a flawless flame,
But breath that lingers long after the burn.
You never begged the wound to leave the same—
You only asked the heart to please return.

And in that hush, where scars became their art,
You healed the world by holding your own heart.



Friday, April 25, 2025

Day Twenty Five – NaPoWriMo – The Handpan

NaPoWriMo: Today we’d like to challenge you to write a poem that recounts an experience of your own in hearing live music, and tells how it moves you. It could be a Rolling Stones concert, your little sister’s middle school musical, or just someone whistling – it just needs to be something meaningful to you.

Day Twenty Five –  NaPoWriMo – The Handpan

The Handpan poem-Huesnshades
Image: From Etsy- Credit to the due Artist


The Handpan

A tribute to Anas Al Halabi


Waves danced before my eyes—

—the ebb and flow,

the ebb and flow—

a tangled memory

rolled into stillness,

the hot air, a mirage,

the music tingled in my bones—

like sa re ga ma pa dha ni sa.

 

Each beat an echo surging

through the blood and cells,

myriad mountains rose and fell—

like the tremor of a tuning fork

my body trilled into tranquility.

 

I closed my eyes—

found myself in a psychedelic swing.

If music be the food of love,

play on…

 





Anas Al Halabi

Anas is a handpan artist in Dubai and I have heard that he is the founder of the first Handpan orchestra. You can see him play here: https://www.instagram.com/p/DHxyh9pv-0x/ 


About Handpan

The handpan traces its origins back to the steelpan, which emerged in the 1930s in Trinidad and Tobago. Originally crafted from discarded oil barrels, steelpan (or steel pan) instruments provided a melodic range that captivated listeners and became an integral part of the Caribbean music scene.

From this rich musical heritage, the handpan would eventually emerge.

In the early 2000s, Swiss instrument makers named Felix Rohner and Sabina Schärer introduced the Hang instrument, a pioneering handpan design, through the Swiss company PANart. Inspired by the steelpan, the Hang featured a unique layout of tone fields, producing enchanting and ethereal sounds.


Wednesday, April 23, 2025

Day Twenty Three- NaPoWriMo-Koel’s Call

NaPoWriMo: Today, we’d like to challenge you to write your own poem that focuses on birdsong. Need examples? Try A.E. Stallings’ “Blackbird Etude,” or for an old-school throwback, Shelley’s “To a Skylark.”


Day Twenty Three- NaPoWriMo-Koel’s Call

Chinese School-Koel from Drawings of Birds from Malacca-c.1805- 18
Art: Chinese School - Koel from Drawings of Birds from Malacca c1805- 18



Every morning, I close my eyes

to listen—
to listen to that birdsong

miles away from my homeland,
from that mango tree
from that once-flourishing garden
where dreams hung on lush threads.
The sky is bluer and the grass greener
There—

koel’s cuhoo cuhoo echoing
through the air.
Mesmerized, I pause—
to breathe—
inhale its palpable song
inhale its saccharine sweetness
inhale its inky blackness—

as if its imprint will give me a voice
to sing my song to freedom.




Coincidentally, two days back in the afternoon, I was speaking to my mother over the phone, and I could hear the Koel’s song in the backdrop—it drew me in. It always does. I live far from home, and the simple bird song brought me an entire world of feelings. It was as if the Koel became a bridge between my mother and me, between the present and the past, between where I was and where my heart longs to be. 


Tuesday, April 22, 2025

Day TwentyTwo-NaPoWriMo-The Things That Held Me

NaPoWriMo: write a poem about something you’ve done – whether it’s music lessons, or playing soccer, crocheting, or fishing, or learning how to change a tire – that gave you a similar kind of satisfaction, and perhaps still does.


Day TwentyTwo-NaPoWriMo-The Things That Held Me

From We're Islands Series - Deepa Gopal-HuesnShades
From We're Islands Series - Deepa Gopal - Watercolour - Detail


I never “learned” to draw when I was young.
Never had paint on my hands,
Or glass-sleeved portfolios.
No towers of sketchbooks,
Just scattered A4 sheets—
Random, undocumented—
Because I never thought
That meant something.

I never had boxes of colored pencils
Or shelves lined with art supplies.
Only sturdy pencils,
A cheap box of watercolors.
I’d flip to the last page of Reader’s Digest,
And draw my heart away.

Still, colors called me.
The way blue stretched across the sky,
The way orange bled into red.
And I moved—
My body learning its own language
Through athletics and dance.
When words failed,
When life grew too heavy to speak aloud,
Music filled the gaps.

I wrote—
To organize,
To remember
Something I’d lost.
Because sometimes,
Words were the only place
That didn’t change.

Later,
I taught myself to paint.
One curious stroke at a time.
No rules,
No judges—
Just the quiet relief
Of watching something bloom
Beneath my brush.
Something I made.
Something I could hold
When everything else
Slipped away.

Art didn’t save me—
Not in the histrionic way—
But it stayed.
It sat with me.
In the mess.
In the storm.
Asked nothing.
Offered everything.

Now,
When the day pulls me apart,
I paint.
Or I write.
And it feels like dancing again—
On a page, in a palette—
A little girl
Finding her way back
To all the things
That held her
When nothing else could.




This poem needs reworking. But for now, here it is.


Monday, April 21, 2025

Day Twenty One-Napowrimo-Garden Log: Morning Report

NaPoWriMo: here’s our daily (optional) prompt. Sawako Nakayasu’s poem “Improvisational Score” is a rather surreal prose poem describing an imaginary musical piece that proceeds in a very unmusical way. Today, try your hand at writing your own poem in which something that normally unfolds in a set and well understood way  — like a baseball game or dance recital – goes haywire, but is described as if it is all very normal.


Day Twenty One-Napowrimo-Garden Log: Morning Report

Thomas A. Gieseke - Spring-Garden Log-HuesnShades
Art: Thomas A. Gieseke - Spring


I stretch and stretch and pull weeds from around the blood-dripping hibiscus—still leaking despite last week’s pruning. The Ixora has developed short tentacles again. They’re within acceptable length but have begun waving and dancing mid-air, which may require intervention if it continues during pollination hours.

The neem tree has, as expected, relocated to its favorite corner. I’ve spoken to it twice about overshadowing the herb bed, but it pretends not to hear. Classic neem!

I water a hundred liters a day, though evaporation has increased ever since the soil began whispering back. The fish—I can angle them directly from my chair now. No bait needed. They volunteer.

A gardener I am, of the rarest kind. I soak the seeds in my palms and sprout directly from them—once this week, twice last month. Regulations don't cover this method yet, but it yields excellent foliage.

Manifold flora and foliage to go. The jasmine has begun humming.

Will monitor.







This took some time for me. I had to get the hang of it! 

Once I fell into the zone, it was fun! Hope you like it too, dear Reader.


Sunday, April 20, 2025

Day Twenty-Napowrimo-Carpe Diem

NaPoWriMo:write a poem informed by musical phrasing or melody, that employs some form of soundplay (rhyme, meter, assonance, alliteration). One way to approach this is to think of a song you know and then basically write new lyrics that fit the original song’s rhythm/phrasing.


I went along with something spontaneous and followed the impulse without pondering too much. I have been unwell for quite some time now, and so some days are still tiresome and taxing.

Here's my take on the Day Twenty prompt:


Day Twenty-Napowrimo-Carpe Diem


Carpe diem-Gather Ye Rosebuds While Ye May, by John William Waterhouse-1909
Gather Ye Rosebuds While Ye May, by John William Waterhouse-1909


1

Think of all things nice
Light, soft, and not a tinge of vice
Join in the summer slumber
I might order a juice or two


2

We can go fishing together
Though I can’t cast a line or bait
Seen some souls doing just that
Playing enough games, alright


3

Silhouettes play games at night
Lurking behind to surprise our might
The wind whispers some scary secrets
Rise, sister, rise from the dead


4

Throw your concerns, hey, you
Let it disperse like a dandelion
A cold song begins to blow
A star shower spins to a sinuous flow


5

Enjoy, my friend, seize the moment
Carpe diem! Why, lament?
Let us turn into the night
Hold each other, let it set right.




Do leave me your thoughts.


Friday, April 18, 2025

Day Eighteen -Napowrimo-At This Hour, What Sound

NaPoWriMo: Take a look at Ellen Bass’s poem, “You’re the Top.” Now, craft your own poem that recounts an experience of driving/riding and singing, incorporating a song lyric.


Day Eighteen -Napowrimo-At This Hour, What Sound

Death and Life - Gustav Klimt - 1911
Death and Life - Gustav Klimt - 1911


Winding through the wet hush of dusk,
your song spilled from the stereo—
Enna satham indha neram*
and something inside me slit, quiet.

The road curled like longing around the hills,
each note looping through my ribs,
a ghost of jasmine on humid skin,
a voice brushing the soul's raw door.

We didn’t speak. We didn’t need to.
That melody—half prayer, half wound—
unraveled time,
and I wept like the sky knew my name.


*Enna satham indha neram - What sound at this hour?

This poem is a response to the haunting Tamil song “Enna Satham Indha Neram” from the film Punnagai Mannan. It is the first song that came to mind as I read the prompt, so I went ahead with it. It explores a quiet, emotionally loaded moment shared between two people. The piece draws on the poignant knowledge that in the film, the lovers are living their final day together, which echoes into the lives of the listeners in the poem, acting as both a soundtrack and a catalyst for introspection. Hence, this artwork - Death and Life by Klimt, though some may find no correlation. 






Thursday, April 17, 2025

Day Seventeen-NaPoWriMo-Alchemy of the Two

NaPoWriMo: ...now for our daily optional prompt. The surrealist painters Remedios Varo and Leonora Carrington moved to Mexico during the height of World War II, where they began a life-long friendship. Today, we’d like to challenge you to write a poem themed around friendship, with imagery or other ideas taken from a painting by Carrington, and a painting by Varo.


Day Seventeen-NaPoWriMo-Alchemy of the Two

LCarrington-RVaro-The-Lovers-HuesnShades
Leonora Carrington-The-Lovers / Remedios Varo-The-Lovers (same title, different versions)



In a blue-walled casa, the air looms dense
Two sisters stir their tea with magic spells.
One with a wild robe, a defiant visionary
The other, a quiet soul, hid in the imaginary.


They swing in the air with their fingers laced
Like Varo’s Lovers, they mirror their face.
Both tread under the inky-liquid sky
They trade secret spells in a moonlit vase.


The kettle speaks of a one-legged wolf
Blue-Red lovers lie around thick-robed forms.
Carrington dreams of a glowing tent
Varo threads through the cosmic fold.


Not muses, never! — not someone’s mirror—
But cartographers of the unseen.
Friendship, they learned, is a spell well-spun
two minds, two moons, orbiting one sun.





Carrington and Varo are both my favourites (I do have a lot of favourites, though). I am in awe of the surrealists, the way they blend dreams with reality in unexpected ways. It is like a liminal space - irrational, strange, symbolic, challenging logic and convention. It is like perceiving someone else's dream and getting drawn into their mystery. What makes them so interesting is how they turn the bizarre into beauty, inviting you to see the world differently.

I had in mind the artworks titled The Lovers by both artists.


Wednesday, April 16, 2025

Day Sixteen-NaPoWriMo-In the Kitchen Steam

NaPoWriMo: Today, try writing a poem that imposes a particular song on a place. Describe the interaction between the place and the music using references to a plant and, if possible, incorporate a quotation – bonus points for using a piece of everyday, overheard language.


In-the-kitchen-steam-Napowrimo-Huesnshades
Image from Pinterest. Credit to the respective artist.

This needed an understanding of the Ragas. I love music, and I do listen to Carnatic and Hindustani and other soulful music, but I don't have the prowess to use it in depth in a poem. So I had to watch a couple of videos to gather a sense of it. I am adding two videos below, just in case you are curious. Sooryagayathri is one of my favourites, an exquisite gem in the ocean of Carnatic music. Indosoul Academy of Music has videos on Ragas called Know your Ragas and I found them while searching about Ragas. The Raga I had in mind was Hamsadhwani and the composition in Vathapi Ganapathim Bhajeham by Muthuswami Dikshitar (one of the Trinity of Carnatic Music, the other two being Thyagaraja and Shyama Shastri)

My humble attempt:

Day Sixteen-NaPoWriMo-In the Kitchen Steam

-raga in a busy kitchen-

The onions hit the oil—
that’s the resounding shruti*.
A sizzle, a breath—
the first note held just long enough
to stir the soul and the dal.

She’s not singing, not really.
Just mouthing the lines, habitually,
as she crushes garlic
under the flat side of a knife.
Vathapi Ganapatim bhajeham…
like a prayer said sideways,
with her hands in motion.

The tap leaks in rhythm.
A pressure cooker whistles its own taala*.
Children argue in the next room
about who finished the Murukku*.
The tulsi* by the back door
leans toward the window—
its leaves dew-damp, still savoring the morning.

She tastes the rasam,
adds a bit more milaku*.
The raga shifts keys
as she hums past the coriander,
half-lost in thought, half-inviting
Ganesha into the turmeric and tamarind.

"Are you ready yet?"
she calls,
and the words land right on the Ga,
unintended but perfect.

In this kitchen,
the raga doesn’t need perfection.
Only warmth.
Only motion.
Only love stirred with a long-handled spoon.

And as the final note dissolves
into the clang of a lid,
the music lingers
in the breath of steam—
a hymn wrapped in cumin and care.


shruti, taala - musical references
murukku - crunchy snack, savoury
tulsi - sacred plant (holy basil)
milaku - pepper
Ganesha - Deity, symbolic of intellectual strength, adaptability, and efficiency. Remover of obstacles and bringer of good luck.






Vathapi Ganapathim by Sooryagayathri


Know your Raga - Hamsadhwani 


Tuesday, April 15, 2025

Day Fifteen-NaPoWriMo-Two Poems

NaPoWriMo: now for our (optional) daily prompt. The MC5 was a 1960s rock band. If you’ve heard anything by them–and you likely have–it’s their 1969 song Kick Out the Jams.

Jesse Crawford, otherwise known as Brother J.C. Crawford, was the band’s stage MC and warm-up man. Below are the words with which he opened a concert in Japan in 1969 (you can find the recording on Spotify/Apple Music as part of the Kick Out the James [Live] [Japan Remastered] album, on the track titled Intro/Ramblin’ Rose).

Brothers and sisters
I wanna see a sea of hands out there
Let me see a sea of hands
I want everybody to kick up some noise
I wanna hear some revolution out there, brothers
I wanna hear a little revolution
[big pause]
Brothers and sisters
The time has come for each and everyone of you to decide
Whether you are gonna be the problem
Or whether you are gonna be the solution (that’s right)
You must choose, brothers, you must choose
It takes five seconds, five seconds of decision
Five seconds to realize your purpose here on the planet
It takes five seconds to realize that it’s time to move
It’s time to get down with it
Brothers, it’s time to testify and I want to know
Are you ready to testify?!
Are you ready?!
I give you a testimonial
The MC5

And now here’s a short little poem by Jane Kenyon:

The Shirt

The shirt touches his neck
and smooths over his back.
It slides down his sides.
It even goes down below his belt—
down into his pants.
Lucky shirt.

And now for your prompt! While Brother J.C.’s warm-up and Kenyon’s poem might seem very different at first, they’re both informed by repetition, simple language, and they express enthusiasm. They have a sermon/prayer-like quality, and then end with a bang. Your challenge is to write a six-line poem that has these same qualities.


Here are my attempts, unsure of how suitable it is though.

Day Fifteen-NaPoWriMo-Two Poems

1

The-Cradle-Berthe Morisot-1872
The-Cradle-Berthe Morisot-1872

Remember, remember!

The light that is shining bright

Can fade away overnight

Remember, to hold on to desires

Light the sparks of fires

Untie your fright to take to new heights.



2

Francisco Goya, Third of May, 1808, 1814


Scream, the blood. Scream, the blood

The blood leaps in the undercurrent

Passion ebbs and flows, the scream gets stuck

Rise above, rise above—the time is still

Blood beckons but hold on to tranquil

Rise from within—if you will.






Monday, April 14, 2025

Day Fourteen-NaPoWriMo-The Rise of a Riotous Song

NaPoWriMo: today, try writing a poem that describes a place, particularly in terms of the animals, plants or other natural phenomena there. Sink into the sound of your location, and use a conversational tone. Incorporate slant rhymes (near or off-rhymes, like “angle” and “flamenco”) into your poem. And for an extra challenge – don’t reference birds or birdsong!

Here's my take:

Henri Rousseau-Tropical Forest with Monkeys-1910
Henri Rousseau-Tropical Forest with Monkeys-1910


Day Fourteen-NaPoWriMo-The Rise of a Riotous Song


The river gurgled through the rocky bend

the hills woke up to the screeching calls

the chatter and gibber in the backdrop fend—

the chirps, the buzz, the hiss, and the clicks—

a meticulously riotous medley.

 

The trees talked about what they love

the roots rumbled and slid to fuse—

the music of the Earth sang of soulful days

they ached for what they painfully lose

at the hands of merciless men—a disgrace!

 

The nights get cool as the summer rains pour,

the wind carries the breath of long-gone land

they speak a tongue not known to many

though those who pause and hold their stand

can often listen to the symphony.





Saturday, April 12, 2025

Day Twelve: NaPoWriMo: Symphony of Ahalya: The Silence, the Song

NaPoWriMo: Today, we’d like to challenge you to write a poem inspired by Wallace Stevens’ poem, “Peter Quince at the Clavier.” It’s a complex poem that not only heavily features the idea of music, but is structured like a symphony. Its four sections, like symphonic movements, play with and expand on an overall theme, using the story of Susannah and the Elders as a backdrop.

Try writing a poem that makes reference to one or more myths, legends, or other well-known stories, that features wordplay (including rhyme), mixes formal and informal language, and contains multiple sections that play with a theme. Try also to incorporate at least one abstract concept – for example, desire or sorrow or pride or whimsy.

Ahalya- Raja Ravi Varma-HuesnShades
Ahalya by Raja Ravi Varma

I have chosen Ahalya's story here (a brief story is below the poem), one of the Panchakanya's (or the Five Maidens - powerful women from the epics of Ramayana and Mahabharatha). Symphony of Ahalya is a retelling of one of Indian mythology’s most enigmatic women — not merely as a cautionary tale, but as a meditation on beauty, desire, silence, and redemption. Through four poetic movements, this piece reimagines Ahalya’s journey: from divine creation to betrayal, from cursed stillness to awakening. Interweaving classical myth with contemporary voice, it explores how narratives shape women, how silence holds truth, and how rising is sometimes the most radical form of grace. This is not just her fall — it’s her song, her stillness, her becoming.

Day Twelve: NaPoWriMo: Symphony of Ahalya: The Silence, the Song

The Moonlight (The Making)

Desire - The birth of beauty and the gaze of gods

In dust, she dwelt not — no, divinely carved,
By Brahma’s thought, from dream unmarred.
Ahalya — not born, but breathed, like flame,
A name that even silence spoke in shame.

O sculptor-sky, what form you chose!
A woman shaped of hush and rose.
She walked, and echoes bowed in grace,
Too fair to fall, too soft for space.

“She ain’t just pretty, bruh, she’s poetry on feet,”
said a nymph in a whisper, trying not to repeat.
“But careful — desire makes gods go blind,
even sages forget the time they bind.”

Indra saw. Indra sighed. Indra schemed.
The king of clouds grew clouded, it seemed.

“One form. One face. One night."
And pride forgot what was wrong or right.

 

The Mirror Masquerade (The Fall)

Pride - The illusion, the trespass, the cost

He knocked in silence, in another’s skin,
Gautama's guise — a borrowed sin.
Ahalya blinked, her breath held tight,
What’s false in fog can feel like light.

He spoke as a sage, but his voice had lilt,
A honey-slick tone with just enough tilt.

I return early, my love, no vow betrayed...
And though the soul stirred — the heart obeyed.

Rhyme turned rust. Lust stole hush.
The dawn broke not with light — but crush.

Gautama came with time in hand,
Saw truth stretch thin on the holy land.

Stone you shall be — till the breath of right,”
he roared, and the earth turned off her light.

But was it wrath? Or was it grief?
His pride dressed clean what felt like a thief.
And Indra — feathered, fractured, shamed —
Wore a thousand eyes where once he aimed.

 

Stone Sonata (The Stillness)

Sorrow - Ahalya’s silence and the passage of time

Time tiptoed past — no tears, no sound,
She stood, not buried, not burnt — but bound.
A monument to misplaced trust,
A hymn of flesh turned to dust.

Yet in that stillness, thoughts ran free,
Like rivers under a rock, unseen at sea.

“Was it weakness? Was it will?
Was the lie so sweet, or the silence so still?”

Words unspoken echoed inside,
Regret — her constant, watchful bride.

Her sorrow was not just the loss of name,
But being known only by her shame.

 

The Touch of Truth (The Awakening)

Redemption - The return of light, redefinition of self

Then came Rama, with his bow of time,
His silence louder than all crime.
His feet brushed dust — and stone took breath,
Ahalya stirred from the kiss of death.

She woke not in weakness, but in knowing.
Not in ruin, but in growing.

“They made my tale, they made me test,
But now, I rise — no curse, no jest.”_

Rama said nothing, for nothing was due.
No blame, no shame, just morning dew.

Her stone was shed like yesterday’s skin,
She stepped from stillness, whole within.

And all who watched, in court or sky,
Learned not of fault, but how grace can lie
In holding sorrow without disguise —
And choosing still to rise.





AHALYA: The tale of Ahalya is primarily found in the Bala-kandam of the Ramayan by sage Valmiki. Ahalya was a princess from the Puru Dynasty and was the wife of the great sage Gautama.

Ahalya's beauty was besotted by Lord Indira who was intent on seeking her companionship. Indra disguised himself as Gautama and Ahalya allowed Indra into her home. Gautama returned from his prayer to discover the misdeed. In addition to cursing Indra, he cursed Ahalya to turn to stone. The curse was to be absolved only when Sri Rama entered the precincts of the ashram. The curse of Ahalya is finally absolved when Sri Rama visits the ashram of Gautama before he reaches Mithila accompanied by the great sage Vishwamitra and his brother Lakshmana. (Google Arts and Culture)